The problem
The client-supplied draft had the substance but not the sequence. Key proof points were landing after the ask, the category framing competed with the product framing, and most slides were paragraph-heavy in a sector where investors swipe through dozens of decks a week.
DeFi audiences expect signal fast, mechanism, traction, and team, surfaced before they have to dig. The first version asked them to dig.
- Story spine and slide order were out of sync, ask landed before the proof.
- Text-heavy slides, paragraphs where one chart or diagram would do.
- Category vs. product framing competing for the same real estate.
- Brand elements present but not yet pulled into a coherent visual system.












