The problem
The client-supplied draft had the substance but not the sequence. The wedge sat too deep, category framing competed with the operating model, and most slides were paragraph-heavy in a sector where investors are reading dozens of climate decks a week.
Climate audiences expect signal fast, why now, mechanism, unit economics, and team, surfaced before they have to dig. The first version asked them to dig.
- Story spine and slide order were out of sync, ask landed before the proof.
- Text-heavy slides, paragraphs where one diagram or chart would do.
- Category vs. operating-model framing competing for the same real estate.
- Brand elements present but not yet pulled into a coherent visual system.























